大多數(shù)雅思考生有一個誤區(qū),認(rèn)為只要能使用很高級的英文單詞就可以拿到7分以上,但一個句型的語法多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性,才是雅思寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一,為了幫助考鴨們突破句型語法的難關(guān),小編就帶大家一起來解析一下雅思寫作的模范句型。
案例分析
初級階段:我們可以很容易的說:聲sound,信息出來,但是我們不明白他的寓意。
進(jìn)級階段:學(xué)會了組詞:聲音 sound of voice,隨后用形容詞來修飾,轟隆降的聲音 noisy sound of voice,其所表達(dá)的意識就更加鮮明了。
高級階段:可以找到想要描述的對象,例如:火車轟隆隆的聲音 the noisy sound oftrain,大多數(shù)基礎(chǔ)好的同學(xué)都能做出完整的句子如下。
I heard the noisy sound of the train.這個句子很好,過去式做到了,主謂賓都有,在雅思口語考試中我們完全可以輕松拿到6分。
但是想要獲得雅思7分,那么下面的句子才是大家最終奮斗的目標(biāo):
盡管我聽到火車轟隆隆的聲音從我耳邊響過,我仍舊集中精力看書,所以我覺得自己很專注。
Although I heard the noisy sound of the train passing by my ears,still l could focus on reading,that's why I think I was really concentrated.
句中although……, still……的從句首先是一個亮點,體現(xiàn)了考生的思維模式,已經(jīng)到了主從句的復(fù)雜句型。
heard, could,was 都體現(xiàn)了考生的靈活的過去式
passing by 動詞ing表伴隨
that’s why 表結(jié)果的從句
was concentrated 靈活的被動語態(tài)
這樣的句子就是7分,甚至7.5 到8分,一句話利用了嫻熟的語法技能把場景、寓意、讓步轉(zhuǎn)折全部表現(xiàn)到位,值得學(xué)習(xí)借鑒。
經(jīng)典句型介紹—被字句、把字句
下面是一些最經(jīng)典、常用的被動語態(tài)表示說話者感覺,我們來一起體會一下!
I was really amazed by….我被…震撼了。
I was really amazed by the Forbidden city in Beijing.
I was really amazed by the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai.
I was impressed by……我對…印象深刻。
I was impressed by the West Lake in HangZhou.
I was impres ssed by his English.
I felt adj./done 感到…
I felt relaxed & refreshed .
I feel pressured .
I feel content.
I feel satisfactory .
1.我所想說的是…… The thing I want to say is that…
我所想說的是現(xiàn)代人更加喜歡在假日旅游而不是呆在家里
The thing I want to say is that modern-day people are much keener on travelling rather than staying at home during holidays.
2.我上次所看到的主要是……The thing I saw last time was mainly that…
我上次所看到的主要是全國的游客都井然有序的排隊參觀每一個館在 2010 世博會上。
The thing I saw last time was mainly that tourists nationwide all queue up for each pavilion in great order inside the 2010 World Expo Park.
3.我所珍惜的自由是……The freedom that I cherish is that.
我所珍惜的自由是我自己一個人主,獨立安排自己的學(xué)習(xí)和休閑,不再和父母及他們的嘮叨在一起了。
The freedom that I cherish is that I now live on myown,independently managing my study & leisure time, not living with my parents & their nagging any more.
4.我所要提一提的是……The point that I want to say is that…
我所要提一提的是現(xiàn)在的生活水平和消費層次已經(jīng)大大好于20年前了。
The point that I want to say is that the living standard & the consumption level are much better and higher than those two 20 years ago.
5.所進(jìn)入我腦海的第一點是……The first thing that sprang into my mind is that…
所進(jìn)入我腦海的而第一點是古建筑可以讓訪問它的人鮮明的學(xué)到歷史而不是從書本上。
The first thing that sprang into my mind is that visitors to those historic buildings can learn history in a vivid way rather than from a book.
6.之所以……是因為……The reason why…is because…
之所以我想成為一名英國大學(xué)的教師是因為我想在西方國家傳播中國的文化。
The reason why I want to become a professor in a university in UK is because I hope to deliver Chinese culture in western countries.
之所以我們中國學(xué)生要學(xué)好英文是因為它可以我們能夠更多的機(jī)會和更廣闊的發(fā)展平臺。
The reason why we Chinese students have to learn English well is that it can provide us with more opportunities & wider stage for development.
7.由于這樣一個事實……This is due to the fact that….
現(xiàn)代人應(yīng)該經(jīng)常去健身房,這是因為運動可以拉升身體,肌肉,韌帶;對于久坐的辦公室工作階層,運動對他們的脊椎也是很好的
Modern-day people should go to the gym regularly. This is due to the fact that exercise can stretch our bodies, muscles and ligaments, for those who sit for too long, sports can really do good to their spines.
8.這是因為……It is because…
我們要多吃蔬菜和水果,這是因為他們富含維他命和纖維對我們的消化和新陳代謝系統(tǒng)是很好的。
We can try to eat more vegetables and fruits, it is because they are full of vitamin & fiber, helping our digestion & metabolism system.
通過上面的分析介紹想必大家已經(jīng)了解了雅思寫作考試的模范句型都有哪些,希望這些句型能給大家?guī)韼椭?/span>